The proportion of the pass rate in the student competency test based on subjects and genders 2010-11

IELTS TASK 1 ; the percentage of students who passed their high school competency exams

The bar chart highlights the proportion of the pass rate in the student competency test based on subjects and genders between 2010 and 2011 academic year. Overall, female students had a significant pass rate which was higher than male students.

Both students obtained the highest percentage in Computer Science, Mathematics and Foreign languages which obtained over 40 % separately in this particular subjects. In addition, either boys or girls in Mathematics, Foreign Languages and Physics attained a roughly similar results. However, girls had a slightly better results in history which got 25, 6 %, while boys only reached 22, 9 %.

In the chemistry, Girls had a slightly better result than boys which constituted about 30, 2 % and 14, 1 % particularly. Simultaneously, girls got approximately 14, 2 % larger than boys in computer science. Geography was only subjects which showed a different report which the pass rate of boys constituted about 30,4 % while girls composed 20,1 % in their competency exam.

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