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What are the qualities of a good neighbor? 'care your attitude to other people'



ernhy 17 / 28  
Mar 26, 2014   #1
Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.

As we know, people live near our home can we call neighbor. Neighbor is people more near with us, can be part of our family. When we sick or have problem, they are people near us that can help. So, make a good connection with neighbor. The good neighbors always give help to other neighbor, if you not in your home the neighbor will protect your home. That is some example for good neighbor.

Some people hope if they have home, they can get good neighbor. Why do people hope that? Because beside have a good home, quality your neighbor can make you comfort to stay in your home. Whatever, people around your home very determine your mood when you were at home.

Have A good neighbor is dream all people who can have home. But how to know a good neighbor? Can all people have good neighbor? Really, I can't answer that questions but may I give you illustration to answer your question.

Firstly, you can't discriminate people around your home. You can't judge people from what you see. You must to behave good for all people around you because if you good so the people around you will do this, likewise on the contrary.

Last, a good neighbor come alone if you have a good behavior with respect to all people. There is no people in the world want nearby with thug.

In conclusion, don't care how people to you but you must care your attitude to other people. The good person always get good person.

hunglk 2 / 1  
Mar 26, 2014   #2
ernhy
As we know, people live near our home can we call neighborpeople who live near our house is called neighbor.
When we sick or have problemwhen we are in trouble
Because beside having a good home
ridwan 8 / 16  
Mar 26, 2014   #3
You must to behave good for all people around you because if you good so the people around you will do this, likewise on the contrary.

Modal (must) is always followed by Verb 1.
dumi 1 / 6793  
Mar 27, 2014   #4
As we know, people live near our home canare the people we call neighbors.

As we know, people live near our home can we call neighbor.

This is too obvious fact and therefore it does not provide an interesting opening to your essay :(
eddies [Contributor] 25 / 1170  
Apr 2, 2014   #5
they can get good neighbor

they can meetfriendly neighbors

people live near our home can we call neighbor

people who live in the house next to you are called the next-door neighbors

dream all people

Not all people plans to pursue this dream :D. dream of some people

Because beside have a good home, quality your neighbor can make you comfort to stay in your home.

Because of wanting to have a good time, the personal qualities of neighbors can bring you a degree of comfort to stay a close as you can to your home.

I can't answer that questions but may I give you illustration to answer your question.

Faulty parallelism.
Possible suggestion: I cannot answer that questions, but as an illustration of this point, I am going to tell you personal opinions.

I see many problems: grammatical mechanics, vocabularies, sentences and ideas.
Read as many authentic texts as you can to improve your writing skills. This help you find some ideas and improve your vocabulary and grammar.
eddies [Contributor] 25 / 1170  
Apr 3, 2014   #6
Last, a good neighbor come alone if you have a good behavior with respect to all people. There is no people in the world want nearby with thug.

This is too short :(

Well, if you have a question that you don't like at all, then you can write with a 5/6-paragraph essay. You write one introduction, three bodies, and one conclusion. This can help you write more words, but some students, that I see, put grandiose ideas, by writing too many words.

Look at what Dumi suggests you with the structure (a 4-paragraph essay). With this structure, you are easy to develop your paragraph properly, one content paragraph for, and one againts. This is good for coherence and cohesion between the sentence-to-paragraph-to-essay construction, and for which in the five/six-paragraph structure this is weak.
upinipin 32 / 48  
Apr 23, 2014   #7
Thereis no people

sing or plur


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