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Quantum Teleportation over 7 kilometres of cables smashes record.



mdamanhuri77 22 / 18  
Sep 20, 2016   #1
World record for quantum teleportation have broken by Two team which can send quantum information 7 kilometres of fibre optic networks. In order to set a long teleportation need to exchange quantum cryptopic keys for encoding through fibres.

Quantum transportation is partical's travelling to another place with particular distance without phsycal travelling between them. We need three participants with one way teleportation: Alice, Bob, and Charlie, for instance. To make an exchange between Alice and Bob need cryptographic keys with setting up the storage for teleportation using charlie's help.

in outstanding, Alice transmits a particle (A) to Charlie. While Bob establishes a pair of entangled particles (B & C), then, sends B to Charlie and withstands on C. Charlie accepts both A and B, and assesses the particles in such a way that It is not Possible to tell whic particle was sent by Alice or by Bob. This is called Bell State Measurement result in quantum state of particle A is tranferred to particle C, whic is with Bob.

It can shorten the distance conceptually and become shortest one now with transmitting the particle particularly.

hasbi 29 / 41  
Sep 20, 2016   #2
Hi, daman, i have read your summary, overall, you have stated your idea related to the topic of the passage. but, here some advice for you in order to improve your writing in the future,.,

THE World record for quantum teleportation have HAS broken by Two team TEAMS which can send ...
... teleportation need to exchange quantum cryptopic CRYPTO PIC keys for ...
Quantum transportation is partical's PARTICLE'S travelling to (...) distance without phsycal PHYSICAL travelling between them. We need three participants with one way ONE-WAYteleportation: Alice, ...

... It is not Possible to tell whic WHICH particle was sent ...
... Measurement result in THE quantum state of particle A is tranferred TRANSFERRED to particle C, whic WHICH is with Bob.
... and become shortest THE SHORTEST one now with transmitting ...

*make sure when you using singular/plural verbs
*how to using comparative form and superlative form " like THE SHORTEST_--> ALL OF SUPERLATIVE FOR SHOULD BE ADDED "THE"

*and also TYPO,. i found there are many wrong types of word,.,


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