Dear Gagan, About grammar and tenses I strongly agreed with you.
Here my self correction, please give me another feedback
a village inhabitant hospitalizes
Often, the ideal ideas contrary with the reality
this I learn a lot to emerges myself in mythe journey to be better.
did I achieved
However, I am working on distance from my family. We separated in different island which is about 1.300 kilometers. They live in Palembang, Sumatera and I live in Mojokerto, Java.
it would be a lot better to substantiate your ideology with some proofs or examples
I already try to give some proofs. Unfortunately, it was not well delivered. Would you quote the specific parts and kindly give me some revise sentences. Thank you :D