You missed the minimum word count by 4 words. The standard is 150 - 200 words, you wrote only 146 words. The word count deduction will apply. Always meet the s word count to prevent your score from starting at a disadvantage / failing TA score.
The first chart
The pie chart
The second image is properly identified. The first one is incompletely identified as it is missing the image identifier "bar" for the chart. To be specific, it is a " crosswise bar chart".
2 main reasons
You forgot to identify the image you will be discussing for C + C reference. For what? What is the subject of the sentence? An incomplete sentence will affect you C + C and GRA scores.
supposed causes
At what percentage rate? It varies per reason. Uhe the data, umembu your audience requirement.
Overall,
Make the change of image reference clear. Transition into the pie chart with a proper introduction. Another C + C mistake.
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