Reasons for migration to and from the UK - Writing task 1: Pie chart

Title: The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007.
The chart shows the main reasons for immigration and emigration in 2007. Overall, The percentage of individuals moving due to having definite jobs accounted for the highest in both immigration and emigration in 2007, while the others have lower proportion in comparison.

Starting at definite jobs in 2007, the number of emigration decreased compare with the number of immigration was 1%, which was minimal by 30%. Secondly, the percentage of immigrants account for 12%, which was 10% lower than of emigration. Regarding citizens moving for formal study, there was a large difference between immigration at 26% and emigration at 4%, which was 22% difference.

Following that, amongst the remaining 3 reasons, individuals migrating for no reason stated took up the cleanest difference that was only 6% for immigration, while was triple the percentage. Next, moving onto (chuyển tiếp) people moving for other purposes, the figures of immigrants consist of 11%, which was 3% fewer than/emigration, which had a slight difference for only 3% with emigration. ast, but not least, citizens immigragrating and emigrating by accompanying their family on relatives accupied 15% and 13%, espectively.

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