Received an email from club

email from club

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Hi Eric,
How's work going?
I am contacting you for the following reason to tell you that I am very happy when I received an email from their manager. Did you received the email from their club?

I expect them to ... In fact, we will have more useful knowledge and sharpen out skills. How about you?
Let me know when you received an email,too.
Please feedback for me !
Love,
Vo Thien
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The email cannot be properly reviewed in its current state. When no writing instructions are provided for the benefit of the educational consultant, where more than half the email is blanked out by the writer, a proper review cannot be made. There is basically no information provided in the email that I can review to help the student improve his task writing skills. It is important that the writer post the complete email, along with writing instructions should he wish to receive a proper review from this consultant at this forum. Only when I have the complete information in relation to the writing task will I be able to provide a proper work analysis for the writer.