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REMEMBERING MATH TEACHER JAIME EXCELENTE



anonym28 3 / 4  
Nov 30, 2016   #1
At that point in time, We remembered one of the best teachers in United states. He born in 1930 in la paz, Bolivia. Both of his parents were teachers .

On the other hands, to follow his parents footsteps, jaime came to The united states in order to learnt speak English and repeated his collage education and teacher training.

In 1974, mr.jaime became a teacher in Garfield high school to teach mathematic, almost all of his students came from poor area in Los angeles, California. Lots of them had serious problems in illegal drugs, gengs and violence.

Jaime started an advanced math program with a small group of students, 18 of his students took the advanced placement test in calculus, they all passed.

At the present time, Jaime received lots of teaching award from the government. Then he retired from teaching in 1988, and died on march 30,2010

ded15 6 / 9  
Nov 30, 2016   #2
He born in 1930 in la pazLa Paz(the name of a place) , Bolivia.

jaimeJaime came to The united s States in order to ...
In 1974, mr.jaimeJamie became a teacher (...) poor area in Los aA ngeles, California.
AbibMuhammad - / 1  
Nov 30, 2016   #3
Hello Mr.anonym28 . Let me give you some suggestions .

He was born in 1930 in la paz,...

You should put verb in your sentence, one sentence consists one subject and one verb .

Thank you ..


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