research of ITT qualifications in 2-year period

The chart illustrates the number of student living in the Great Britain obtaining teacher training qualifications in 2 periods between 2005/6 and 2006/7, and the percentage of men qualifications. Overall, there are changes showing in this time frame. In any case, while the number of Total teaching qualifications obtained have dominated in whole figures, the gradual increase has revealed by Bed & other degrees.

To begin, the number of females in first category increased dramatically from 23,865 to 24,335, representing the highest proportion in every period. In contrast, the number of males decreased steadily between 8,065 and 7,610.

Finally, 71.4% women qualifiers in 2005/6 for PGCE rose slowly to 72.9% in next year. However, over a quarter men qualifiers fell gradually to 27.1 percent. For the last category, even though its total and girls number jumped sharply with the gap about 500 females, boys and their percentages remained stable in around 1,000 males and fourteen percent, presenting the lowest portion in this research.

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A closer look at the data reveals that the total number of female teachers trained initially stood at 23865. Yet, this figure rose to 24335. As seen, there was a marked rise in two years. This is in stark contrast to the male figures in both years, when there is a decline in total number male teachers trained, between 8065 and 7610 teachers .


Well, I think you'd better not to use "finally" in this part, since no sequence events are stated at all.


Boys and males are of two different meanings. If you use 'boys' to replace "male", then I think this can be misinterpreted. Beware of using synonym. I prefer keeping the original phrase rather than the inappropriate ones.

Irham,

In my opinion you tend to be out off topic in introduction.

In any case, while the number of Total teaching qualifications obtained have dominated in whole figures , the gradual increase has revealed by Bed & other degrees.

Total teaching qualification is sum up from PGCE and BEd
(Total teaching qualifications = PGCE+BEd & other degree)

if you want to say the dominated figures it refer to PGCE students.

let me try :

In any case, while the number of Post Graduated Certificate Education (PGCE) dominated in whole figures, the gradual increase has revealed by Bed & other degrees.