Six different languages with the most native speakers - IELTS - TABLE

Different languages - the highest number of speakers

The table given has the data concerning about six different languages with the most native speakers.
There is a striking point that Mandarin Chinese has the highest number of speakers with 1090 million people in total, even higher than the combination of the number of Hindi and Spanish speakers. In contrast, Arabic and Portuguese are the two languages used least, which have the figures recorded even under one-fifth of the number of Mandarin Chinese speakers.

Another notable feature is that the number of native speakers is mostly higher than the number of speakers as an additional language in any category, except for English. 942 million English speakers include only 339 natives, the rest is non-natives.

Overall, despite the fact that English does not have the largest number of speakers it is still the most common language used by most foreigners.

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Hi, I see some things in your essays
1. It lacks too much information, you need to highlight some important figures
2, your overview is too short
I hope it help :))

Your explanation become less clearer by the paragraph. Your first paragraph, the summary overview, was quite good and informative. It was composed of useful information and gave an effective trending statement. However, the second paragraph lacks information. You should have a total of at least 3 sentences per paragraph. That way you can fully utilize the scoring rubic to your advantage.

Since you wrote only 140 out of the 150 minimum words for this essay, I do not expect it to get a passing score in an actual test. You will have percentage deductions for the missing 10 words, which could have a direct effect on the ability of your essay to gain a passing score. Remember, run-on sentences are the enemy of an essayist. Avoid long sentences in order to give a clearer discussion and also,. portray more complex and simple sentences within the presentation. You are scored on that heavily in the GRA section. That score could spell the difference for you in the end.

Thank you a lot *crying* i love feedbacks so that I can recognize errors or anything else and improve myself. I hope next time I will do better <3

This is a comparison task but I cannot see your comparison. Furthermore, it is too less information that helps me to evaluate your essay. I hope that you can perform better in the near future, my friend!