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IELTS; 'six processes' - Cycle life of frog


upinipin 32 / 49 1  
Apr 19, 2014   #1
Life cycle of animals is very interesting to know. One of them is frog. Frog has an interesting cycle life to study.

Cycle life of frog, almost same as other animals in the world. From eggs has to be an adult frog.

Frog to lay an egg is in the swamp and then the eggs change to be embryo. After that, that's embryo change to be tadpole. In this tadpole divided into three processes in order to be tadpole adult. After that, the tadpole has had front legs break through. This process took a long time and then start to have a pulmonary breathing. In all of this process frog has had complete part of the body but still have a tail from tadpole.

After has pulmonary breathing frog still continued their cycle life into two stages. The next process is tadpole frog. Tadpole frog has had complete part of the body. In this process we can say complete process for frog to be adult frog.

Overall, cycle life of frog pass by six processes in their life. This cycle life of frog gives us a lesson of life.




ernhy 17 / 28  
Apr 19, 2014   #2
This process took a long time and then start to have a pulmonary breathing.

present time :)
Eva Novita Sari 47 / 72 2  
Apr 19, 2014   #3
After that,that'sthat is embryo change to be tadpole.

in our essay writing should not abbreviate the word

:)
Shokhusrav 10 / 27  
Apr 19, 2014   #4
You should use complex structure of sentences
dumi's advice to put an overview after the introduction is good as it's easier to read form general to specific


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