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A Storm Wiped Out Power to An Entire State in Australia



PHA2016 39 / 38  
Sep 29, 2016   #1
For couple days, South Australia is still fighting with storm effect after power device had turned down. ABC News reported that power had been resuming at the center of Adelaide on Thursday while a thousand consumers are without electric supply and horrible weather expected recovery completely.

According to ABC, the storm destructed public facilities such schools, shops, and gas stations were closed. The government spoke that blackout cannot been prohibited. Official said force winds took out twenty two towers and tore down power lines. This dropped down many trees and rooftops ripped off buildings.

"This is an unprecedented event. Nobody has seen such a catastrophic failure of so much major infrastructure in any other part of the nation." ABC quoted from official South Australia.

BAMS14 18 / 21  
Sep 29, 2016   #2
ABC News reported(REPORTING) that power had been resuming (...) are without electricS supply and horrible weather ...

According to THE ABC, the storm destructedDESTRUCTING public facilities such ...

Official said, force winds took out...

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