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Students should learn all subjects at school, not the ones they like. Do you agree or disagree?



Thao Bui 1 / -  
May 16, 2024   #1
Many people say that all subject should be learnt at school, while others don't agree with that. From my perspective, I totally agree with this statement.

To begin with, studying different subjects can develop student's social skills as well as soft skills. Thay can learn necessary skills such as communication skills, self-study skills and emotional controlling. They will have the abilitities to cook, swim or even solving a problem. Various knowledge in diverse lessons may prepare them to deal with challenges in life. Moreover, well-rounded education will help them become a knowledgable person and develop their ways of thinking. They can be aware of enormous problems and they will take action to change that. Learning all subject at school compulsorily may be a solution to modernise student's mindset in order to make the soceity better day by day.

In conclusion, studying all subjects at school is a necessity for all education of all time

Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15376  
May 17, 2024   #2
This is an automatic failing score task 2 essay. You have failed to meet the necessary minimum writing requirement of 250 words. During the actual test, you will receive deductions representing the unmet word count. The percentage of deductions will be applied to your Task Accuracy score. So the examiner will review your work and score it bsed on an already failing score. In these instances, you will be unable to recover from that failing preliminary score. You will end up failing the test based on the TA requirement alone. You need to write 4 paragraphs worth of words, numbering at least 250 to avoid these word penalties. It is important that you meet the word count if you want to have a prayer of passing this test.
akmaster101 4 / 6  
May 17, 2024   #3
Like Holt said, you should aim to be as close to 250 words as possible. Additionally, you should separate your main arguments into paragraphs to further strengthen your arguments, which will make it easier for the examiner to understand. Also, abilitities is an incorrect spelling of "abilities."


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