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If the students study the same nation curriculum then they can equally perform in all the field


kumawatakki 1 / -  
Sep 19, 2014   #1
A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.

All students should study the same national carriculum at the school level is the main issue. when students study the same carriculum then they can be judged equally. Students are judged by a certain examination at the time of admission in the college. A examination is based on certain types of fact in the questions and the student can answere only if he/she can understand these facts. so if the all the students have study the same carriculum then they all are perform equally.

for example, in India, IIT examnination held for admission in bechlor of technology(an engineering course). million of students appread in the examination. these students studied different-different course in their higher school carriculum. so students that studied the higher school in english medium can easily fight the examination and the students who are differernt background fight difficulties to clear the examination. And things does not end here, these students find more difficulty when they admitted in college and studied the same subjects which is difficult for other background students rather then english background students.

Take a another example of GRE examination, students find it difficult to chase the examination as all the students have different backgrounds. Students whose mother tounge or native language is english they can easily clear the examination: and other nation whose native language is other then english find it quite difficult, though, they can chase the exam.

at last, if the student studied the same nation carriculum then they can equally perform in all the field of test then the real meaning of the examination reflect. so, at my stand, all the students must study the same carriculum.

Shankargouda 1 / 1  
Jan 26, 2015   #2
so if the all the students have study the same carriculum then they all are perform equally.

this was not written correctly. Rest looked good, Are you writting these essay for GRE? That will help in evaluvating it much better..
Elith 3 / 10  
Jan 27, 2015   #3
I would change more things, however beyond your scripture and grammatical errors, you used India and GRE to develop only one clue idea to support your issue, you should find some other more compelling statements. I took GRE a month ago I also wrote on this issue(with your opposite view). I advice you to organize your analytic writing of a issue in 4-5 parts:

Introduction
Body 1
Body 2(only if you have time)
Qualification --> the opposite point of view, advantage and disadvantage the opposite view has
Conclusion


I hope to have been helpful!


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