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IELTS: Summarizing a Bar Graph (Population of Asian Elephants)


Jakurino 1 / -  
Oct 24, 2014   #1
The graph illustrates the estimated population of Asian elephants in nine countries in 1997 and 2004.
India had the greatest population of animals throughout the period but also experienced a drop of over 30% to about 7400 animals in 2004. The second largest population of elephants could be seen in Myanmar where it declined from 5200 to 4600. This is a very small decline compared to the figures of Thailand, where the number of elephants fell by two thirds. A similar pattern could be seen in Malaysia. Here the number of animals decreased from 3000 to slightly over 1000. In Sri Lanka the population dropped by 10% to 2700 animals in 2004.

Cambodia was the only country to experience a growth in the population of Asian elephants. Here the number rose from 1300 to 1400. In Laos the population remained constant at 1600. Vietnam experienced a slight drop in the number of animals, while in China it halved.

Overall, in all countries except Cambodia and Laos there has been a decrease in the population of Asian elephants, with the most significant drops seen in Malaysia, Thailand and China.




eddies [Contributor] 25 / 1,208 476  
Oct 25, 2014   #2
The graph illustrates the estimated maximum population of Asian elephants in nine countries in both 1997 and 2004

HereT he overall numbers in population rose from 1300 to 1400, a rise of 100 elephants in 7 years. Then, followed byin Laos where the population of elephants remained constantvirtually unchanged, at 1600.


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