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IELTS Summary Task U.S. Hasn't Gone This Long Without a Big Hurricane in 150 Years



Dioba 68 / 97  
Oct 7, 2016   #1
Nowadays, Hurricane Matthew slams into Haiti and heads toward the United States, particularly southeast coast. This destructive storm may become initially storm to hit the United States in more than 10 years. It is become the record all the time. Matthew could become destroy the United States similar with the last major hurricane -Wilma- struck such as Key West and Florida with speed of winds approximately 120 miles per hour. This is also mean Matthew has become the longest period and the most destructive major natural disaster since record began in 1851. Fortunately, other major hurricane such as Ike, Sandy and Katrina absence surge The United States. This is since steering currents remained friendly and there have been a lot of recurving storms. Originally, Matthew initially as a tropical or windy rainstorm in Southeastern. Furthermore, the storm has strengthening in October and it is strongest briefly reach 160 mph. For anticipated and avoid citizen fatalities, the government was declared for South Carolina and North Carolina.

Abrahamlincoln 54 / 50  
Oct 7, 2016   #2
Hello Brother
Let me give you some advices

Nowadays, Hurricane Matthew slams >> Hurricane Matthew slammed

It is become the record all the time >>it became

This is also meant Matthew has become
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justivy03 - / 2265  
Oct 7, 2016   #3
Hi Dioba, here's another one from my end.

- NowadaysToday , Hurricane Matthew slams
- into Haiti and heads towards the United States, - storm may becomeinitiallyis one tostorm to
- It is become thea record all the time .
- Matthew could become destroy the United States
- Wilma that struck a few states such as Key West and, Florida with a speed
- This is also mean that Matthew has become
- the longest period and the most destructive major natural disaster
- since record began in 1851.
- This is sincedue to the fact that there is a steering currents
- remainedthat is friendly and
- Matthew initially asis a tropical
- or windy rainstorm in the Southeastern state .
- Furthermore, the storm has strengtheningstrengthened in October
- and it is strongest briefly reachat 160 mph.
- For anticipatedTo anticipate and be cautioned as well as toand avoid citizen fatalities,
- the government washas declared
- for South Carolina and North Carolina in a state of national calamity .

There you have it Dioba, I hope the above remarks are helpful, as you can see, you still need to focus on the correct form of the words to associate in your essay as well as in completing your sentences.


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