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Summary TED (v) Jay Walker English mania



Dioba 68 / 97  
Nov 29, 2016   #1
Summary TED (v) Jay Walker English mania

Every aspect in the world has its own universal language. The world has an aspect as the universal language in each subject. For instance, Mathematic is the language of science subject, music is language of emotions subject and English becoming the language of problem solving. Nowadays, every person in the world has studied English as a second language. Two billion people around the world study English in this era. This phenomenon spread widely around the world. Not only in Latin America, but also another hemisphere such as China, India and South East Asia also affected. For instance, China has become one of the countries which teach its young generation for studying. China has regulation for their young generation to start study English since primary school, particularly third grade. Jay Walker, as the speaker of TED, called this phenomenon as English mania. Jay walker also predicted that China will become the largest English speaking country. He concluded that English represents a hope for better future, as it becomes the common language to solve global problem.

ichanpants89 16 / 742  
Nov 29, 2016   #2
Dioba,
Here's my contributions towards your TED Video summary. I hope you can follow through.

- Every aspect(unclear, what aspects?) in the...
- The world has an aspect as the universal language in each subject.(truly unclear)
- For instance, mathematics is the language of science subject , music is language of emotions subject and English becomingbecomes the language of...
- Nowadays, every person(are you sure about this? it seems you over-generalize an idea) in the world has studieduse English as a second language.

- ...India and South East Asia are also affected.
- ... young generation for studying English .

As you can see, unclear statement can lead to a confusion and misunderstanding. Try to write a clear and informative statement rather than taking the speakers' saying for granted. :)


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