Summary New Scientist - Gender equality is boosted by better infection control

Gender equality is boosted by better infection control

Development in gender equality over the last few decades has been brought by better control of infectious disease. This is because women, today, have golden opportunity to continue their education; therefore their awareness about health is much more improved. As a consequence, improvements in infection control are more likely to have similar high stakes for women in developing countries.

source: newscientist

Bung, you rushed through the process of summarizing your article. You did not read the essay in its totality. There were two aspects of the article that needed to be represented in your summary. These are the infections and child birth parts. Both of which seem to have a direct relation with gender equality throughout history. Your summary is actually very poor and wanting in information. You were not able to properly assess and note the important information that could have made your summary quite a complete an informative one. Did you read the whole article or not? If you did, was the reason your summary was too weak because you could not express yourself properly? Or did you just run out of time while you were developing the summary ? These are all reasons that could contribute to your failing this particular test. I want you to try and better apply yourself in your next practice run by trying to really create a balanced and informed summary. I suggest that you try to rewrite this summary when you have the time. This time, base your summary on the suggestions I provided here.