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Summary of passage what is Ecotourism?



path83 2 / 1  
Aug 25, 2016   #1
Ecotourism approach has known in two last century. It caused by green movement to save environment. Definition of ecotourism divided in two words are local nature and culture. Some categories to address it the first, ecotourism that involve nature conservation. Second, to social worker that related environment protection. And third about wilderness is regarding preserve animal. The eco tourist mainly activities are renewable and reduce resources. At the time, water pollution, damage reef and coral caused by cruise ships passenger throw down garbage in the water. Since traveler interested using cruise to sailing, operator change to be more environmentally way. A lot of cruise ship owners are publicity of their product which related of natural ecology. In this way the natural movement have been famous.

Wolf Larsen - / 109  
Aug 25, 2016   #2
Hello path83

I applied some adjustments to your text so that it sounds more stylistically refined:

Ecotourism [...] The concept of ecotourism has been around for the last two centuries.
It caused [...] The concept's emergence can be explained by the rising popularity of the environmentalist movement.
Thedefinition of ecotourism [...] implies that there are two dimensions to it - natural and cultural.
Some categories [...] It is commonly assumed that ecotourism serves the cause of protecting the natural environment.
Second, to social [...] you should consider removing this sentence - it doesn't make much sense.
And third [...] Ecotourists also strive to preserve the endangered species of animals.
The eco tourist [...] The concerned concept presupposes that people should switch to the renewable sources of energy.
At the time [...] Ecotourists can hardly be found onboard of cruise ships.
Since traveler [...] The conventional tourist industry should become more environmentally friendly, as well.
The last two sentences are hardly intelligible... I would've corrected them but it's quite unclear to me as to what did you want to say. You'll probably be better off removing them, as well.

I hope this came of help. Regards.
akbarmappiare 31 / 445  
Aug 25, 2016   #3
Hi Mr. Patta
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Ecotourism approach has BEEN known in SINCE two last century. It IS caused by green movement to save THE environment. Definition of ecotourism ARE divided inTO two words, are local nature and culture. Some categories to address it the first, ecotourism that involve nature conservation. Second, to social worker that related environment protection. And third about wilderness is regarding preserve animal. THERE ARE SOME CATEGORIES ADDRESSED. THE FIRST CATEGORY IS NATURE CONSERVATION. FOLLOWING THAT, THIS CATEGORY AS THE SECOND RELATES TO ENVIRONMENT PROTECTION FOR SOCIAL WORKERS. TURNING TO THE LAST CLUSTER, THAT PRESERVES ANIMALS IN A WILDERNESS.The eco-tourist mainly activities MAIN ACTIVITIES OF ECO-TOURIST are renewable and reduce resources.

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