It made people who were around in that area in panic situations.
A thousand tourist were
I'm not sure with this. Read a good grammar book.
the number of tourist
The number of tourists
This is the common mistake when you write writting ielts task 1, please pay more attention for this.
overseas tourist and local touristTourist
is countable noun.
As usual , Lombok Airports were functioning ...
Find the other chunking words.
an a country which has massive volcanoes , . Interestingly, it made people ...
The original sentence is fragment sentence. It will be better the clary of sentence instead of the complex sentence which is wrong structure.