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Ted Summary - Technology hasn't changed love. Here's why



fadhilmd25 41 / 71  
Oct 4, 2016   #1
Helen Fisher started her presentation by overview of why people do built love. Thus, tendency of male to have several wives are undeniable in every culture as it is common to have and build love to each other. Meanwhile, the technology has helped us to transform the era of loving each other. She conducted research to investigate the brain function during processing love emotion and invented that human brain has ability in controlling sex drive, feeling towards partner and bonding with long-term partner, which combined together to form sexual, romantic and have family senses.

Furthermore, the effect of technology to the love emotion between individual does not changed at all, instead it modified by a modern trend called the concept of paradox of choice. This concept had been identified in the brain and conclude the changes in how brain cope with it, by calling it as cognitive overload. In consequence of cognitive overload, slow love was invented. This could be seen by overlooking the statistics data: over 50 percent of American today do have long-term partners but not marry each other as the terrified consequences are unavoidable. After all, the people do have romantic relation in their life, even only once.

Fadhilahumar91 61 / 68  
Oct 4, 2016   #2
Hi...
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Thank you
goldieu 5 / 8  
Oct 4, 2016   #3
Hi Fadhil,
I have some advice for you

- Helen Fisher started her presentation by the overview of why people do builtbuild love
- Thus, the tendency of male to have ...
- human brain has an ability in controlling sex drive
- Furthermore, the effect of technology toon the love (...) does not changed at all, instead it modified ...

Hope it helps :)


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