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The table below gives information about some of the world's most studied languages.



tharo 1 / -  
Jan 19, 2024   #1
The given table illustrates the details of some languages learned the most throughout the world. This paragraph will intensively analyze these figures.
It's apparent from the table that the prominence of English is striking. 1.5 billion people are learning English. In contrast, Chinese learners are only 30 million people, much less than English native learners. However, its native learners seem to nearly reach the number of foreigners studying English. According to the data, the number of countries speaking English is approximately twice that of China.

Talking to other figures, in terms of the number of people studying the language, the amount of French learners is many times that of Spanish learners. Besides, people studying Italian are about one-third of those of Japanese. Another facet, countries where French and Spanish are spoken are nearly twice times many as places using Japanese and Italian respectively. However, French native learners are fairly similar to Japanese learners and Spanish native learners are considerably more than those learning Italian.


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Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15393  
Jan 20, 2024   #2
This paragraph will intensively analyze these figures.

You do not need to repeat the writing instructions in the summary. What you should be doing, is presenting the summarized information in relation to the highs and lows of the data reference in the table. This paragraph will receive a failing TA preliminary score.

There is no clear trending statement in the presentation. You immediately entered into the reporting presentation. That will be a problem because you will receive a 0 score for the trending statement section. Since you did not present a clear trend in the presentation.

Since you avoided using the actual figures in the later part of the analysis means that you will not get a passing score for this presentation. You have to use all the numerical figures that you were presented with in the analytical report.
triplej 2 / 2  
Jan 24, 2024   #3
@tharo
i think you need to use the exact data from the table, pick out the highs and lows and any anomalies.
i suggest you use the following structure
Overall trend
Specifics
Exceptions
Mochi_Krystal 2 / 3  
Jan 24, 2024   #4
You are generalizing for the most part. Remember the format: Intro-overview-details. You can only generalise in
overview but not almost the whole task. Put more numbers and compare them.


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