A table illustrating information about consuming goods purchasing in five European countries

consumer spending - data from the table

Given is a table illustrating information about purchaser consuming goods in Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey in 2002.
In general, it can be seen those essentials commodities such as food, drinks and tobacco were the most favorite items for buyer. Furthemore, each country had the different demand.

Out of the 5 countries, the Irish and the Turkish were 2 populations that spent on food, drinks and tobacco the most, at nearly 29% and 19% respectively. Moreover, Turkey also had the highest percentage in leisure and education with 4.35% while expenditure on clothes and shoes were significantly higher in Italy, at 9% than other countries.

It is easy to figure out that the minority number of food, drinks, tobacco and also clothing, footwear were cosumed by the Swedish people (15.77% and 5.40%). Spain had midly higher figures for these 2 categories but however, Spainish citizen had the lowest figure in leisure and education.

p.s: ietls cambridge 7 writing text 1

The summary overview failed to indicate a trending statement based on the highs and lows of a specific country. The trending statement misinforms the reader as the statement makes it appear that the trend is similar overall, which is never the case.

The writer does not deliver the academic requirement for complete paragraphs. A complete paragraph is composed of at least 3 sentences. The student only provides 2 sentences per paragraph. It is incompletely analyzed as far as the examiner is concerned. Writing proper complex sentences, as opposed to these long sentences would have solved the formatting problem, created clearer presentations, and increased the per consideration score.

By the way, it is the responsibility of the student to provide the comparison image for a more extensive review result.