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The table about Rail transport in five different countries



anggicaroot 20 / 19  
Sep 29, 2015   #1
The table shows proportion about train transportation in four different countries in 2007. Overall, it can be seen that passenger population had the biggest percentage in all of countries, except in Japan. In any case, while the number of people using rail in Japan was the highest percentage, USA had the lowest proportion over the year.

To begin, the most popular country on number of people using rail transport was Japan, representing 37, compared approximately 0,3 in USA. On the other hand, UK and Italy had similar statistic, depicting at under 59.

Turning to passenger population, UK and Italy were presenting the largest percentage at 770 (UK) AND 780 (Italy). In contrast, Japan and USA were not dominant in the proportion of passenger which Japan was the lowest percentage at 1,980.

Cargo carried had the same proportion in three different countries such as UK, Japan, and Italia, at around 23.01, whereas UK just got proportion at 2,820 over the year.


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Bayuwibowo 48 / 62  
Sep 29, 2015   #2
Hello carrot..
let me try to helps you although my tips not always right..

Overall, it can be seen that passenger population had the biggest percentage in all of countries, except in Japan.
- i think Japan has the highest passenger population among all from your table, but your statement is the opposite.

Turning to passenger population, UK and Italy were presenting the largest percentage at 770 (UK) AND 780 (Italy). In contrast, Japan and USA were not dominant in the proportion of passenger which Japan was the lowest percentage at 1,980.

-according from your table, it not presenting about percentages but about kilometers.

Miss Carrot please be careful about the describe of the tables and more detail about the measurement.

Good luck!!


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