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Data on the use of rail transport in 2007

LeTanMinhQ 1 / -  
May 16, 2023   #1

The table illustrates the data in the use of rail transport in the UK, the US, Japan and Italy in 2007.

Overall, it is evident that out of five countries, Japan dominated the highest number of people commuting by rail transport, and the distance per person. In addition to this, the most significant number of transported commodities was seen by the USA.

There were more people using trail transport in Japan than in the USA. To be specific, the figure for Japan stood at 27 millions of people while that of the USA accounted for 0.3 million. Similarly, in terms of the average distance per person, the most remarkable figure belonged to Japan at 1980 kilometers, surpassing that of the USA by 1900 kilometers. However, the number of billions of tons of merchandise in the USA came in first place with 2820 billion, far higher than the number of tons of commodities in Japan.

Moreover, a similar pattern was witnessed by the other 2 countries. Specifically, the number of trail users in the UK, Italy made up over 5 million, at 5.9 and 5.5 million respectively. 770 and 780 kilometers were the average distance per person in the UK and Italy. Finally, there were 22.2 and 21.9 billion tons of cargo transported in these respective countries in 2007.

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May 31, 2023   #2
The essay is overwritten by 18 words. You are not supposed to write more than 200 words since this is a 20 minute writing task. Any time you take to write a longer essay means you will not have enough time to complete the task 2 essay as expected. You mahny want to use a timer next time you write a task 1 practice test.

Do not use all caps and bold letters when writing the summary overview. While some books and online sites use that format for emphasis while teaching the students, it is not a common practice in the actual test writing. You could lose points in the GRA section due to the obvious writing rules violation. Write the essay as you would a regular reporting paper. Without the caps lock and bold words.
ptthao0801 3 / 4 1  
Jun 1, 2023   #3

you should have an opening where you rewrite the topic sentence

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