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The table below shows the number of students living in the UK gaining English language teacher training qualifications in 2007/8 and 2008/9, and the proportion of male qualifiers.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The represented table reveals information about the total amount of students in United Kingdom who acquired English language teacher training in 2007/2008 and 2008/2009, with male as their focus point. It is noticeable that the male rate for TEFL and Cambridge UCLES CELTA & other degrees in 2007/2008 were slightly higher, compared to the following year.
At the beginning, in the period 2007/2008, the number of male students in TEFL was 6,870, which experienced a small decline to 6,545 in the next year. Cambridge also had a similar case, where they experienced a small decline from 17,3% to 12,1%, in 2008/2009.
However, the number of females students in TEFL and Cambridge UCLES CELTA & other degrees remained steady in two years, whereas the number of females in TEFL was three times than Cambridge UCLES CELTA & other degrees. As the fact remained, despite the total participants remained stable in two years, it was clearly seen that the number of females surpassed the males, in both subjects
Thanks in advance.
The table below shows the number of students living in the UK gaining English language teacher training qualifications in 2007/8 and 2008/9, and the proportion of male qualifiers.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The represented table reveals information about the total amount of students in United Kingdom who acquired English language teacher training in 2007/2008 and 2008/2009, with male as their focus point. It is noticeable that the male rate for TEFL and Cambridge UCLES CELTA & other degrees in 2007/2008 were slightly higher, compared to the following year.
At the beginning, in the period 2007/2008, the number of male students in TEFL was 6,870, which experienced a small decline to 6,545 in the next year. Cambridge also had a similar case, where they experienced a small decline from 17,3% to 12,1%, in 2008/2009.
However, the number of females students in TEFL and Cambridge UCLES CELTA & other degrees remained steady in two years, whereas the number of females in TEFL was three times than Cambridge UCLES CELTA & other degrees. As the fact remained, despite the total participants remained stable in two years, it was clearly seen that the number of females surpassed the males, in both subjects
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