Text messaging: write about an invention that has changed your life

write about an invention that has changed your life
what is the invention?
Hows has it changed the way you do thinks?
who else has been afffected by this invention?
how do u feel about those changes?

BTW im esl student ;)
so english is my 3th laguage ;)

and i will be thenkful for any changes or adds hits whatever to make it bether thx :)

My biggest invention with change my life was a text messaging. This discovery change my way of writing and communication between my friends. SMS is a short cut of Short Message Service. The SMS concept was developed in the Franco-German GSM cooperation in 1984 by Friedhelm Hillebrand and Bernard Ghillebaert, as a result SMS change many ways of doing things. Also its effects many people lives as well. Likewise the majority of effected by this discovery were teenagers.

I think that text messaging change ways of writing lathers for example in the old ways people use to write corresponding lathers to each other. Although now people are forgetting how to write a simple lather to his or her friend so its effect your language skills by decreasing it even though we are using this service in our basic daily life. A person may now carry out a conversation with another user ... [..]

The biggest invention that has changed my life is text messaging.

This discovery (I'm not sure if text messaging was a discovery, I think invention would be a better word) has changed my way of writing and communicating with my friends.

... as a result SMS change many ways of doing things.
I wouldnt say "as a result", i would just end the sentence and start a new one.

That's pretty much all I can say now. I think I'll return to ur essay soon.
Best of luck.

The invention that made the biggest change in my life was text messaging. This discovery changed my way of ...

I think that text messaging changes ways of writing letters, for example. In the old ways, people use to write corresponding lathers letters to each other. Although now people are forgetting how to write a simple letter to his or her their friends, so its affects language skills, decreasing them even though we are using this service in our basic daily life. A person may now ...

I had to delete part of your esay because you took it directly from another website!

gsmfavorites.com/documents/sms/introduction/

Don't do that, or you will get in trouble!! Practice to revise what you read and put it in new words.

:-)