My Thrilling Birth Day Surprise in Royal Boutique - simple narrative essay

My Thrilling Birth Day Surprise

My unforgettable experience happened in my birth day surprise several months ago in Royal Boutique. It all came on December 20th, 2014. All activities I joined were almost in that place for a competition called Teruna Teruni Bali. On the quarantine day, my friends who were my competitors and I gathered in a Royal Boutique's meeting room for discussing the preparation that we should do. I lost my competition t-shirt and the committee took it as a small matter as I forgot it easily.

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My Thrilling Birth Day Birthday Surprise

My unforgettable experience happened in my birth day surprise several months ago in Royal Boutique.It all came on December 20th, 2014 . I had an unforgettable birthday surprise a couple months ago on December 20, 2014.All activities I joined were almost in that place for a competition called Teruna Teruni Bali.It took place at Royal Boutique, where I was preparing for a competition called "Teruna Teruni Bali".On the quarantine dayWhen the day of the competition arrived , my friends who were my competitors and Imy friends and I gathered in a Royal Boutique's meeting room at Royal Boutiquefor discussingto discuss the preparation that we should do. I lost my competition t-shirt and, but the committee took it as a small matter asand I forgot it easily. All was going well until I got the crewsthe crew members asked me about the t-shirt. I was suddenly confused on what to say. The more they asked me, the more I felt nervous and guilty, since I had no any idea where it was. In the end, one of the committee membersdecided to give me choices whether he resign himself from the committee or I myself left as a non-active active participant.gave me the option that either he resigns or I quit the competition . In additionSince I had to quit the competition , I was not allowed to join any of the activities any moreanymore . I was completely shockedupsetas I felt how big my struggle for this competition and I had to leave because the lost t-shirtbecause I was dismissed for just losing the t-shirt . Finally,As I was leaving, they asked me to come forward and stand up. Everybody was silent, and all the situation changed into a surprisingly atmosphere when one of crewscrew members asked me softly "when is your birth day?", "When is your birthday?" I closed my eyes and tried to lock my mouth as I wanted to yell louder and louder. I heard my friends and committee cloppedclap their hands while they were singing a birth daybirthday song to me. I could not stop thinking for my small friends' caringcare and lovinglovefor me on my birth daybirthday . This will be kept in my heart forever. Thanks my friends!

Hey Komank, I am glad your story had a great ending. I added and re-arranged your sentences to bridge some gaps in your story and make it more grammatically correct.