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Total world energy consumption and electricity generation - Task 1 - Pie chart



bongmibo 3 / -  
Aug 31, 2025   #1
The provided pie charts compare the proportion of energy consumed and electricity generated by different energy sources worldwide for the previous year.

What is most striking when looking at the pie charts is that fossil fuels, which encompass oil, coal, and gas, made up the majority of both energy use and supply of electricity. By contrast, renewable and clean energy accounted for a significantly smaller proportion of the total. Moreover, oil required the largest share of global energy while providing the smallest share of power.

As for conventional fossil fuels, it can be seen that oil constituted roughly a third of energy demand worldwide, which was followed by coal accounting for approximately a fourth of the total. However, while coal provided almost 40% of global electricity, oil's production of electricity was insignificant, being less than 7%. Gas, on the other hand, constituted roughly 20% of both energy use and power generation.

A stark difference is evident in the case of clean and renewable forms of energy, which collectively formed a much smaller share in overall energy use and electricity provision. The electricity production from all resources of clean and renewable energy was more than their energy consumption, with the exception of combustible renewables and wastes, which consumed 10% of global energy while supplying no electricity. Nuclear power consumed roughly 6% of total energy, triple that of hydro, whereas both forms of energy supplied around 15% of total world electricity.


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Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15921  
Aug 31, 2025   #2
The provided pie charts

To meet the TA requirements, you need to indicate the number of pie charts. You should also enumerate the types of energy sources listed. The summary overview is incomplete. It will not receive a passing preliminary score based on TA requirements. You have to deliver at least 3 sentences that represent the overall information provided in the first paragraph to meet the writing requirements for that section.

You are working on a 20 minute essay, without the aid of a timer. You can only realistically write 200 words in that case. You will cut into the Task 2 writing time of 40 minutes when you write almost 250 words. Remember that the score is not going to be based on the number of words that you use. It will be based on the accuracy of your report in terms of information. That means, you need to write quickly and explain yourself within a short amount of time. Keep it simple, keep it short. No more than 200 words. Do not cut into the task 2 writing time. Use a timer when you do the practice essays to make sure you can meet the 20 minute requirement.


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