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Transformation in transportation infrastructures regarding the routes accessing to a city hospital



Emily Chiang 2 / 3  
Dec 30, 2019   #1

Road assess to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010



The given maps illustrate several transformations on transportation infrastructures regarding the routes accessing to a city hospital between year 2007 and 2010.

Overall, there were three dominant adjustments conducted referring to vehicle access to the city hospital, including two added roundabouts, newly established bus station, and extra parking places.

It is evident that the previous combined parking lot provided for both the public and staff in 2007 was redesigned in 2010. The particular parking facility was divided into two individual sectors and made use by the citizens and hospital employees respectively. The staff car park was placed in front of the hospital building with the general public car park set on the side, each owning an entrance directly leading to the Ring Road and city hospital.

As is also observed, it was only available for people to drive or went on foot to city hospital back in 2007, while the newly constructed bus station contributed to an additional public transportation choice for the patients in 2010. In comparison to the simple pathways connection layout in 2007, the bus station was associated with two roundabouts located on Hospital Road, forming a transportation hub to disperse the car flow.


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Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15369  
Jan 10, 2020   #2
197 words can be considered an acceptable number of words to write for this task, which has a 150 minimum word requirement. While the information you presented can be considered complete, your essay presentation will receive a score mark down due conciseness errors. When referring to only one comparison image, there is no need to say "this particular parking" since your previous description indicates there is only one parking area for image comparison. Simply saying "This parking facility..." would have shown that you are capable of saying things directly. A trait important in a student who may be asked to do research in the future. Be direct, state the facts as indicated. Your vocabulary score will increase when you show that you can easily express yourself using relevant words without the use of word fillers.


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