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As global trade increase, many goods, including those we use on a daily basis, are produced in other countries and have to be a transported long distances.
Do the benefits of this trend outweigh the drawbacks?
A number of countries are becoming producers of certain goods that we use in daily routine due to the development of global trade. Furthermore, this seems likely require more distance to reach its destination. Prior to this, there are two point of views regarding to this issue, first, some people stand on the notion that mentioned the drawbacks are more likely to occur in general, but I tend to say that there will be more weight on benefits when global trade development leads to multi-country cooperation.
In many country, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong while the others consider it as valuable work experience
Discuss both opinions and give your opinion.
The youth seems always categorized as non-productive class and often they are not considered to enter workplaces. However, hiring children as a paid worker becomes a reality which happened in many countries. There are several notions regarding to this issue, for instance some people believe that this could be a precious experience to be undergone, but I would like to say that such condition will lead to a totally disastrous children development.
Unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school program (for example, working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood, or teaching sports to younger children).
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Community service which trending in this day and age is non-paying activity that is performed by a group of people for the benefit of the public. In addition, a positive atmosphere in societies will result in practically. It drives high school to involve unpaid community service program as their necessary education program (for example, charity works, neighbourhood improvements, or teaching sports). While some people think that it is not crucial to be a compulsory part of high school program, I would more likely to agree that it will bring a positive ambience and benefit for student development.
As global trade increase, many goods, including those we use on a daily basis, are produced in other countries and have to be a transported long distances.
Do the benefits of this trend outweigh the drawbacks?
A number of countries are becoming producers of certain goods that we use in daily routine due to the development of global trade. Furthermore, this seems likely require more distance to reach its destination. Prior to this, there are two point of views regarding to this issue, first, some people stand on the notion that mentioned the drawbacks are more likely to occur in general, but I tend to say that there will be more weight on benefits when global trade development leads to multi-country cooperation.
In many country, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong while the others consider it as valuable work experience
Discuss both opinions and give your opinion.
The youth seems always categorized as non-productive class and often they are not considered to enter workplaces. However, hiring children as a paid worker becomes a reality which happened in many countries. There are several notions regarding to this issue, for instance some people believe that this could be a precious experience to be undergone, but I would like to say that such condition will lead to a totally disastrous children development.
Unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school program (for example, working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood, or teaching sports to younger children).
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Community service which trending in this day and age is non-paying activity that is performed by a group of people for the benefit of the public. In addition, a positive atmosphere in societies will result in practically. It drives high school to involve unpaid community service program as their necessary education program (for example, charity works, neighbourhood improvements, or teaching sports). While some people think that it is not crucial to be a compulsory part of high school program, I would more likely to agree that it will bring a positive ambience and benefit for student development.
