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The two tables compare the number of exchange students from Europe to Australia and from Australia



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Feb 14, 2025   #1
The two tables compare the number of exchange students from Europe to Australia and from Australia to Europe in 2007 and 2009
Overall, the total number of European students going to Australia increased over the two years, while the number of Australian students studying in Europe remained unchanged. Among the European countries, Germany had the most significant rise in exchange students.
Looking at the table of exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia.In 2007, a total of 186 students from Europe moved to Australia, and this number rose to 226 in 2009. France had the highest number of students in both years, with 61 in 2007 and a slight decrease to 60 in 2009. While that, Germany saw the most significant increase, from 27 students in 2007 to 63 in 2009. Sweden also witnessed an increase, from 32 to 42 students. Moreover the United Kingdom dropped from 31 to 25. The Netherlands remained stable at 36 students in both years.
Looking at another table, the number of Australian students going to Europe remained 152 in both two years. France saw the biggest increase, from 37 in 2007 to 58 in 2009. The opposite was true for Sweden, the UK, and the Netherlands that all the number of exchange students decreased. Sweden went down from 33 to 27, the UK from 32 to 23, the Netherlands from 32 to 18 respectively .Germany was the only country besides France that showed an increase, rising from 18 to 26 students from 2007 to 2009
Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15609  
Feb 15, 2025   #2
You have overwritten this analytical essay. The word requirement for this essay, that falls within the 20 minute writing time allowance is 150-200 words. You wrote 252 words which indicates you spent more than 20 minutes writing this paper and, that you did not allow for enough time allotment for the writing of the task 2 essay. You need to be conscious of your word count as the basis of your time allowance so as not to go over the time limit for the task.

There is a missing punctuation mark at the end of the first sentence, which will result in a GRA markdown since you showed an inability to use proper punctuation marks. While it may have been an oversight on your part, it indicates a lack of proper writing skills on the part of the examiner. Make it a point to leave at least 5 minutes towards the end of your draft writing to allow for proper review, editing, and finalization of your content prior to submission.

Practice proper page formatting requirements during your practice test as well. Remember to use clear paragraphs with separations on the page so as to indicate that you are meeting the 3-4 paragraph requirement for this task. Right now, your paper is not in the proper format and could receive additional deductions in the T&A section of it.


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