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The value of understanding ideas and concepts is higher than learning facts.



cht1128 2 / 3  
Feb 9, 2012   #1
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Essay Topic
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for
them to learn facts.


Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Although many people believe facts have more practical effects than abstract words, I think ideas and concepts have more potential force that will affect our whole life. In my opinion, the value of understanding ideas and concepts is higher than learning facts.

The first reason is ideas and concepts are difficult to grasp. Unlike facts, we can find it out by continuously testing. On the contrary, ideas are hard to perceive, because ideas usually contains more range of knowledge and develops for a long time. Therefore, understanding ideas and concepts will increase our competitiveness.

Second, ideas and concepts are usually created by outstanding persons. Those people dedicate their whole life to specific areas and in the end they left all their efforts in their words. Those words are the ideas and concepts we learn now. Thus, learning ideas is not just learning it, but learn from those great persons.

The third reason is we will benefit a lot by understanding just one idea or concept. For example, there are too many stories describing how a person succeed by being motivated by one idea or concept. Merely only one idea will create huge powers that we cannot even imagine. Hence, we will gain more by grasping relatively small amounts of ideas.

In conclusion, we do nothing without any fact; nonetheless, if we want to achieve something great, then merely holding facts is absolutely not enough. We need the help from ideas, concepts, and those brilliant people.

dumi 1 / 6793  
Feb 9, 2012   #2
because ideas usually containsmorea wider range of knowledge and developsforove r a long period of time.

Those people dedicate their whole life to specific areas and in the end they leftleave all their efforts in their words. --------- for me, this sounds a bit weak sentence because it does not convey your idea convincingly.
basawang 10 / 73  
Feb 9, 2012   #3
Second, ideas and concepts are usually created by outstanding persons. Those people, who dedicated their whole life to specific areas and,in the endthey left all their efforts in their words in the past . Those words are the ideas and concepts we learn now. Thus, learning these ideas is not just learning it realizing the ideas themselves, but learnknowing the spiritfromof those great persons.

In conclusion, we can do nothing without any facts ; nonetheless, if we want to achieve something great, then merely holding facts is absolutely not enough. We need the help from ideas,and concepts,and those brilliant people . ("help from ideas, concepts, and brilliant people" seems weird)

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