IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - WASTE OUTPUT

Hi, could you give some feedback on this report for IELTS writing part 1? thank you.

The chart compares three different companies in terms of their waste production from 2000 to 2015. Units are measured in tonnes. Overall, the company with the highest amount of refuse throughout the time was company A. Both company A and B managed to reduce their waste output at the end of the period. Meanwhile, company C saw a rise in its waste production.

In 2000, 12 tonnes of waste was produced by company A, while company B and C produced around 8 and 4 tonnes of waste production respectively. By 2005, both company B and company C had increased their waste output by 3 tonnes. By contrast, company A had declined its waste output by about 1 ton.

By 2015, a dramatic rise was seen in company C's waste output, with its figure growing to around 10 tonnes and the respective amount of waste output of company A and B dropping to nearly 8 and 3 tonnes.

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The analysis could use more words. The aim should be to write a maximum of 200 words for the task 1 essay. You can achieve that by using more analytical references in your writing. For instance, a more specific identification of the image as a line chart would have helped add to your LR and C+C score. Your summary overview and trending statement are perfect though. Highly acceptable in terms of presentation and will receive a good preliminary passing score.

However, the reporting paragraphs lack in terms of analysis. You are only reporting on the information, which limits the complete task 1 presentation. Add some analysis next time to get a better score overall.

There are some plural errors in your writing as the phrase "both company" should be changed into "both companies". In the final paragraph, I recommend that you should divide the sentence into 2-3 sentences to make it more comprehensive and informative.