Wind turbines - the figure describes how the elictricity is made and best place to locate generators

The figure describes how a turbine can generates electricity and available places to put it. It is noticeable that wind turbine is constructed from 4 main part. In any case, spotting wind turbine in higher location invents optimum wind blows.

Then stand out from the diagram, the wind turbine consist of blades, wind sensor, generator, and steel tower. In the first process, blades which are made from fiberglass or wood are whirled since hit by the wind. Next, the electronic sensor adjusts the direction and velocity of that turbine and sends the data to personal computer inside the controller room. The generator has a function to convert the kinetic energy from blades into electricity and it can produce up to 1500 kilowatts.

Concerning to the best places spotting a turbine, the figure reveals at the peak of plateau can obtain maximum wind strengths. Alternatively, that turbine can be placed in sea level or in a locally, but as consequences it produces less electricity.

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how a turbine can generates electricity
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how a turbine can generate electricity

that wind turbine is constructed from 4 main part
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that the wind turbine is constructed from 4 main parts

the wind turbine consist of blades
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the wind turbine consists of blades

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are made from fiberglass fibreglass or wood are whirled since hit by the wind

data to personal computer inside the controller room
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data to apersonal computer inside the control room