Too much, too young should schooling start at age

How old the children shoul begin their education? It can be disputed. England stated that 4 years old is the answer with several other countries. On the other hand, 130 early chilhood education disprove it and recommend England to postpone formal education for middle chilhood up to 7 years old. Thet added that children must be nurtured with Pre-school .

The UK minister of Education still advocate earlier formal teaching. Anthropological, psychological, neuroscientific and educational studies have identified that Eraly Human enabled to be powerful learners and problem-solvers. In addition, Neuroscientific studies espouse this view that play as a central mechanism in learning.

Developtment psychologists have pointed out inti two mental processes that underpin this relationship between play and learning. First, most children that pretending a paper to pretend as a real ship. It can nurture to underpin language, drawing and mindset pattern. Second, all sorts of pshycal, constructional and social play make children more aware, control their pshycal and mental activity.

There is another vital and strong proof. In 2004, a study of 3000 children diplayed that an extended period of play-based pre-school education made a rapid variety to learn and well-being through the elemantary school years.

hello mdamanhuri, it was an interesting essay and also i really appreciate with your efforts to do this. but, i have a several advice to you to make your essay more good.

at the last sentence of first paragraph, you write "Thet added that children must ..." i think you got a typo, so it should be replace with "They". and also at the last sentence at the third paragraph, you write "............control their pshycal and mental activity." you have another typo, it should be change with "physical".

i think that's enough from me, thank you very much and keep practice!

Hi! I have some advice for you:

shoul = should

It can be disputed. make it subtle = People are still debating this issue.
What do you mean in this sentence?

Thet added that children must be nurtured with Pre-school .

Is the "that" you mentioned is the name of someone or you accidentally press e instead of a? If it is mean to put information from someone by adding his name, I think you should put his competency. For example:

Thet, the minister of ...., add some interesting points....

Hi,
I am not a good writer but I want to share something that I've got by my experiences
Your essay is quite complete, you've already made some complex sentences with connective words but you should pay more attention in your diction, as your essay is not clear enough. Try to simplify your sentences by choosing the appropriate words. And I found some typo in this writing so try to read it many times before you post it.

Thanks