DO NOT START A SENTENCE WITH AND.
Good advice! For the IELTS I think it is best to be careful and not "bend" any rules. According to the rules of grammar, you are not supposed to start a sentence with a conjunction (and, but, or). But, people break that rule all the time! In an essay like this, though, it is best to obey all rules.
avoid starting *every sentence* with the word "I think" or "I suppose"
This is another good piece of advice.You are cool, northerly!
Here is something else:
However, on the other hand it is often claimed that many of us can not
life live without some things.
live -- verb
life -- noun
Make this a complete sentence by adding some words:
Mainly, this is caused by the fact tha t our personal values influence our behaviour directly.
But I know that
it whether people agree with this idea depends on their priorities.
And In conclusion I think that we should ...
Otherwise the world would look like
from a some kind of horror movie in 50 years. I am certain of it.----- wow, brilliant ending!! I never thought of it that way!!!! :-)