The Prompt is: Identify three seperate hardships that Mariam has encountered and discuss how each experience has shaped her personality in some way. This is what I wrote so far: In Khaled Hosseini's novel, A Thousand Splendid Suns, Mariam encountered many hardships including, being born a female and illegitimately, her lack of education and also her struggles against abuse in her arranged marriage. Is this a good thesis statement?
Identify three seperate hardships that Mariam has encountered - need help making a thesis statement
not a very good one i think... dont want to be insulting truly... are you sure these are the right points... i dont think so... just wanna help.. no criticizing..
I think you should try to make your thesis statements very clear and understandable.
I know it's not good looking for some help to make it good. @temptprovidence Given the prompt what would your suggestion be for points to write about? How would you make it clearer @aadan212?
maybe you need books for that search... if i get anytime i will help you :)
