Essay: Ms Accounting Post graduate goals, skills in which you excel, and key accomplisment

Hi..
I am Opi, plan to apply Ms. Accounting this year.. Been struggling to draft my essay with question as follow describe your post graduate career goal, the skills in which you excel, and your key accomplishment. Do you have any suggestion how to develop the idea to answer those three question and connect the answer for all question.

Any comment would be very appreciated!

Hello Opi,

Your graduate admissions essay should follow the following general outline. If you are still stuck we can help.

1. Your Background
2. How your interest developed in your area of study
3. How you pursued your interest (here you can talk about your education, research etc.)
4. What are your future goals
5. How will this program help you achieve your future goals
6. Final summary.

-Admissions Advice Online

I think you should describe these areas as to how your essay could be improved:
- The choices you have made in your career
- Your past experiences have combined to provide you with your demanding skill set.
- The appropriate next step in your future career and life change, which you might land if you did not leave to pursue this program