Paper should be 8-10 pages, include diverse array of resources in MLA style; use a clear thesis/ research question for backbone of paper; avoid fallacious rhetoric, and construct logical arguments to advance the idea.
Ceasing Excessive Force by Police Officers to Extinguish Its Deadly Effects
I'm unclear about the main theme of this paper. Am I correct that it is about how to stop police officers from using excessive force that can sometimes lead to deadly consequences?
Assuming that is the case, I would rephrase the title to something like this: How to Curb Excessive Police Force and the Deadly Consequences that Can Result from It
I'd then go into detail about the problem of excessive police force, citing case examples to highlight the problem (especially cases that resulted in deadly consequences).
Then, I'd write about the various ways to prevent excessive force in the first place: better training of police officers (and I'd go into detail here if the paper needs to be 8-9 pages long - for example, list all of the ways in which police training can be modified to help prevent this problem), more Taser use (vs. gun use), etc.. I think quoting people in the know would be very effective here, as long as you do it properly.
Finally, I'd conclude, stating something to the effect of this: Although changing the current system would require much time and effort, it would be well worth it if doing so could help prevent even one death.
I hope that has helped you!
Assuming that is the case, I would rephrase the title to something like this: How to Curb Excessive Police Force and the Deadly Consequences that Can Result from It
I'd then go into detail about the problem of excessive police force, citing case examples to highlight the problem (especially cases that resulted in deadly consequences).
Then, I'd write about the various ways to prevent excessive force in the first place: better training of police officers (and I'd go into detail here if the paper needs to be 8-9 pages long - for example, list all of the ways in which police training can be modified to help prevent this problem), more Taser use (vs. gun use), etc.. I think quoting people in the know would be very effective here, as long as you do it properly.
Finally, I'd conclude, stating something to the effect of this: Although changing the current system would require much time and effort, it would be well worth it if doing so could help prevent even one death.
I hope that has helped you!
