comparison/contrast essay: Two cities

hi..can you help me in my comparison/contrast essay..??plz..!! this is between two places..can you check my grammar and vocabulary plz..!!..tnx.!

yea... if you actually post the essay?

Here is a great site to get you started. I look forward to seeing it!
unc.edu/depts/wcweb/handouts/comparison_contrast.html

Make sure that, regardless of similarities and differences, in both the first and last paragraph you give the thoughtful idea (thesis) that is the soul of your essay.

oh thank you very much, guys..,for such a warm welcome..!!is it okay to post my whole essay? it's a long essay..

yea, somebody's bound to read it :D

it might be interesting, who knows?

Good essay!!

If you want to compare or contrast the two cities, think about outstanding points such as geography, population and industry. How are these points different?

One city is on the mountain and the other is near the sea.
one city has more than 1 millions and the other is less than that
One city focuses on chemical types and the other concentrates on automobile

Here are my suggestions

Help to start an essay to compare and contrast two cities (with outline )

hi ...

can anyone help me .. because i have exam essay tomorrow .. and i don't have time .. ( 4 hours remaining )

please can anyone give me essay with outline about 2 cities ... thank you

New York big apple broadway manhatten wall street empire state
Beijing forbidden city great wall chinese food temple of heaven
Both metropolis