As computers are being used more in education, there will be soon no role for teacher

In the last decades there have been immense advances in technology in most aspect especially in the field of education. Nowadays, a large number of students rely in computers to research for information and to produce a perfect paper work for their homework. Regarding the use of computer in education, there are two schools of thought. Some people argue that this computer will die out teachers' role in classroom while this is refuted by others.

Most of universities and schools have adopted computers for their students. Students today can do more school work in better formatting by using computers. One of the most advantage use of computer is when it comes to distance learning. Distance learning have been adopted world wide. Students today can save time and effort through distance learning. However, distance learning can not be useful without availability of computer and Internet access. Therefore, people who support the opinion saying computer will replace teachers in school argue that this opinion will be true in the coming years.

On the other hand, there are some people with other opinion argue that present of teachers are important in class and it hardly can be mimicked by computers. Teachers' role in class is not only delivering knowledge but also can go further. They can interact with students' emotion and try to support their pressures sometimes they go through. Teachers are also able to discover students' deficiency and able to resolve it.

In conclusion, there are two schools of opinion regarding the replacement of teacher by computer. Some people argue that, teachers will be replaced by computers in near future, while others claim that computer can not teach emotional feeling of the students. I personally believe that teachers and computers present in school today are mandatory and both of them need each other.

In the last decades there have been immense advances in technology in most aspects especially in the field of education..In the modern age, a large number of students rely on computers to research for information and to produce a perfect paper work for their homework.

One of the most advantage use of the computer is when it comes to distance learning. This system of education has been adopted world wide. Students today can save time and effort through distance learning. However, it can not be useful without availability of computers and Internet access

On the other hand, there are some people with the contrary opinion argue that presence of teachers is important in class and hardly can it be mimicked by computers.

In conclusion, there are two views of opinion regarding the replacement of teachers by computers

Nowadays, a large number of students rely inon computers to research foraccess information and to produce a perfect paper work for their homework.for their school assignments and projects.


.... well this is a simple argument and the usage of "two schools of thought" sounds a bit too serious and inappropriate for this situation.


There are few things I find missing in this introduction although you have made attempts to follow the appropriate structure. First, its contents lack relevance to the prompt. Your prompt talks about the role played by teachers would be replaced by computers. So what you need to talk about here is that issue. Nothing much is said in that regard. Second, you have not included your own opinion about the issue.

monokakau
Dear Mr. monokakau,
lot of thanks for the correction, hope to see you again in my next article :)

dumi
Dear dumi,
again i do appreciate your comment and I will do all my best to improve my English writing skill considering your great comment and recommendation. see you in my next article ;-))