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My essay is on drugs - start and conclusion



ompoc 1 / -  
Jun 8, 2010   #1
how do i do a conclusion for my essay i dont know where to start, i know i have to basically summarize what i have written. my essay is on drugs and my question and thesis for my essay are there is no such thing as a safe drug. "To what extent do you agree. This opinion is quite true there is no such thing as a safe drug but it is possible under expert supervision for drugs to be relatively.

for my body is

1. unsafe legal drugs- tobacco and alcohol
2. unsafe illegal drugs- heroin and cocaine
3. safe use of legal drugs- prescriptions
4. safe use of illegal drugs- marijuana

yonman 6 / 47  
Jun 8, 2010   #2
Hello,

Yes, your correct you need to sum up everything in an organized matter. Drugs have their advantages for people who are in need of them, but also can destroy people's life depending on the substance, how often they use and how long they have been using it for. Those are the people who choose to abuse drugs, and the physical addiction can be to strong for them to stop.

Try and rework your thesis and add all your four body points into the conclusion. Make sure the last sentence is good one the reader will remember.
EF_Kevin 8 / 13053  
Jun 10, 2010   #3
My essay is on drugs

Ha haha haha haha ha, I have never heard that before. You get the Funniest Title Award.

Hey, the disorganization of your essay.. ha ha, maybe it is because the essay is on drugs. We should do an intervention...

Okay... it is good to talk about safe and unsafe, legal and illegal? I don't think so. You need to support your argument that drugs can be "safe." You are right to say it is "relative," but you need to explain some more.

Can any drugs be as safe as, say, driving a car or playing sports? That is how to make the argument. You cannot say anything in the world is absolutely safe because the body is delicate.

Show that responsible use of some drugs can be as safe as other things that are considered safe.

BUT, maybe it is fair to say some drugs, like meth and heroin, are never safe because the brain is altered to make it so that people are sick without heroin, and meth makes people sort of.. like... age at a really fast pace, which just can't be considered safe!

So... explain in your essay how using certain drugs responsibly is safe compared to other activities.


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