My essay about my English teacher is really personal, is it okay?

I have to turn my college essay to my english teacher
and the problem is my essay is really personal...
i wrote about my family circumstance with no money and problems that i overcame.
im just so embarras that my teacher will know my personal history(?)...
i've never tell my story to anyone before, even my 10years best friend doesnt know it...

Anyway i have to turn my essay to the teacher becasue she has to check my grammers and spellings ..
i'm just so embarrassss....

try to make your essay different. every one writes about their family income and stuff. just be different and try to revel something interesting like how u tackled them and what your goals ll be to solve them. and mention how important it is for you and your family

precisly speaking, it's about ma parent's education style, and i added my poor income background .
anyway i think i wanna post my essay later in here...so i can fix my grammers before my teacher sees mine
, i dont get embarras in online :D
at least i dont wanna get embarras by my poor grammers+spellings skills from my teacher
so thank you for your advice!