sisther11 1 / 1 Sep 29, 2012 #1I have to turn my college essay to my english teacherand the problem is my essay is really personal...i wrote about my family circumstance with no money and problems that i overcame.im just so embarras that my teacher will know my personal history(?)...i've never tell my story to anyone before, even my 10years best friend doesnt know it...Anyway i have to turn my essay to the teacher becasue she has to check my grammers and spellings ..i'm just so embarrassss....
sid018 1 / 1 Sep 29, 2012 #2try to make your essay different. every one writes about their family income and stuff. just be different and try to revel something interesting like how u tackled them and what your goals ll be to solve them. and mention how important it is for you and your family
OP sisther11 1 / 1 Sep 29, 2012 #3precisly speaking, it's about ma parent's education style, and i added my poor income background .anyway i think i wanna post my essay later in here...so i can fix my grammers before my teacher sees mine, i dont get embarras in online :Dat least i dont wanna get embarras by my poor grammers+spellings skills from my teacherso thank you for your advice!
