'Fairbanks and Seward Alaska' - United States Naval Academy 500 word essay.

I could make this essay short and sweet; but human nature isnt about that.
there are things people prepare them selves for to keep moving forward to satisfaction. I am a wanting to see what my limits are and push them as hard as possible even if it means blood, sweat and tears.

i have many passions and talents, some that i havent even discovered yet. People say i was born to lead, and that is important to me because im getting out of high school. also knowing who i need and want to be is a crazy feeling, as it would be for anyone that wants to persew what occupation they want.

I have always looked at the military as my first option and it may have been my only. I do have alot to learn mentally and physically. The United States Military Service Academy is helping over a million get prepared for their dream career. I have challenged everything i have known my whole life. I have done it all by myself, from learning algebrah to weight loss. I am a fast learner and a great teacher when im needed. I havent been the president of any school clubs or joind in many, or even played every sport the school has to offer, but i want to make a sacrifice to be a better leader and have my chance at being the best at it.

I awlays been more inciago them most, i grew up in Fairbanks and Seward Alaska, and my family never really had much. but i never let anything get in the way of who i am today. since i moved to the lower 48 all the friends from the time i met them i always stayed loyal to them. and none of them never doubted my abilities.

this isnt all, but its a start. i just wanted others oppinions and some help.

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