Essay on Gym; Need help on writing the essay

Hello everybody i have problem with the essay about Gym, my teacher needs essay around three body ( the natatorium, the fitness center and sustainbility ) i did it two time but she gave me "0" so cloud anyone help me !!

Please post your essay, or what you have completed, so we can take a look at it and help you with your assignment.

I would post the essay first here so we can help you. You know, it might just be an error with the computer. Maybe your gym teacher put the wrong grade in. He/she gave you a zero? That doesn't sound right.

This was my essay, she said to me does not work !!

In this modern world people are leading a sedentary life style due to this many diseases like diabetes and obesity are evident even among the young so doing regular exercise is a necessity . Gym is a perfect way to keep fit easily available cheap and convenient even in cities.

The gym has always been a fit place for me. I have played in a basketball, volleyball and jogging , as well as swimming. I usually go in the gym to practice and to play games but I also sometimes go in there during lunch time to just relax and escape from pressures of life for a while. I like the gym because it is where I exercise sport which is my life. I love exercise sport, I have been playing since I was child. The gym is where I feel comfortable and I can be myself around my friends. Sometimes when we be in gym we do match between us in volleyball after we finish we go to another match in pool. Indeed, become the gym in our life important thing to overcome many things, instance the diseases which became threaten people's lives. with the absence of the role of education on the importance of the gym in our lives. To other thing There are two groups of people that go to the gym the first group is go the one time or several times, that is not enough to get interests. Second group who go every days or day after day that what we need to get life more comfort.

In one word, we must encourage each other to build more from gyms and attention to educating people about the importance of gyms in our lives and how to maintain our health and to overcome the pressures of life.