Hi, i have to act as a reporter and say what happened in st.petersburg, russian in january 22, 1904. can you please edit my work. my teacher always says that i have to use big words. Can u please try to add some big words in it.
For many years workers have been treated extremely terriblely. They have been overburned with work, insulted, and treated as slaves. They have never been considered human beings. And finally this afternoon they took a step forward and head to the Winter Palance to meet Nicholas II for justice and protection. Over 200,00 workers were presented in front of the winter palance. The officers quarding the palace told the worker to leave right away. When the workers denied that, they got angry and stared to fire shots in the air. When they saw no reaction of the crowd, they stared to shot fires directly in the crowd. Which killed five hundread of people and wounded thousands. This horrible incident has left the entire nation shoked. Our latest reports tells us that Nicholad II was not presented in St. Petersburg while this all this happend but still many people consider him the reason this bloody day.
For many years workers have been treated extremely terriblely. They have been overburned with work, insulted, and treated as slaves. They have never been considered human beings. And finally this afternoon they took a step forward and head to the Winter Palance to meet Nicholas II for justice and protection. Over 200,00 workers were presented in front of the winter palance. The officers quarding the palace told the worker to leave right away. When the workers denied that, they got angry and stared to fire shots in the air. When they saw no reaction of the crowd, they stared to shot fires directly in the crowd. Which killed five hundread of people and wounded thousands. This horrible incident has left the entire nation shoked. Our latest reports tells us that Nicholad II was not presented in St. Petersburg while this all this happend but still many people consider him the reason this bloody day.
