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If you could invent something new, what would you invent ?



sung_tung /  
Jul 26, 2009   #1
I'm going to write about this topic : "If you could invent something new, what would you invent and Why?

_ I would invent time machine because: I and everyone could
+ go back to the past and explore secrets in the past
+ correct his mistake in the past
+ go to the future to see how life will go by.
Please help me to develop my ides. Also will we discuss this topic? what would you invent and Why?

EF_Sean 6 / 3460  
Jul 26, 2009   #2
A time machine seems like a good choice. You need to tell us what the purpose of the essay is, though. Is it a TOEFL essay (or similar thing?) Or is it meant to be something a bit more thoughtful? If the latter, you might want to think about some of the potential drawbacks of a time machine, especially if everyone had access to one. The potential for unintended consequences, paradoxes, and temporal wars, etc.
OP sung_tung /  
Jul 26, 2009   #3
thanks very much, EF_Sean. It is Toefl essay. I have thought of consequences of time machine but if I give the consequences in my essay, will I have to find suitable soulutions to those problem? And if I write about potential drawbacks of a time machine, will I have to prove that advantages outnumber disadvantages?
EF_Sean 6 / 3460  
Jul 26, 2009   #4
If its a TOEFL essay, you can just focus on the benefits of inventing a time machine. In fact, you probably should do that.
EF_Simone 2 / 1975  
Jul 27, 2009   #5
Right, discussing the drawbacks and ethical dilemmas associated with time machines leads into treacherously complicated terrain. Better to stay with with benefits, describing these as vividly as you can.
sani - / 1  
Oct 7, 2011   #6
"if you could invent anything, what would be this?" - How to start an essay?

please someone write an essay on following topic
"if you could invent anything,,what would be this?"
munchkin 1 / 4  
Oct 7, 2011   #7
Try opening the essay with an experience or an interesting topic. If the essay is in a science research oriented paper then you need to start with a need with statistics.

Hope this helps. :)


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