Hello, I am new here and have an essay to write regarding my brother's death. I'm not really sure how to get started, and I am horrible at writing thesis statements. Please help
Narrative Essay about Brother's death
Latrina, there are a number of ways that you can approach this essay. Let me offer a rundown of possible thesis statements for you that could possibly be used in applying for schools (if that is your purpose).
1. The way his death helped to shape your dreams and ambitions.
2. How your relationship with your brother during his lifetime taught you lessons you would not have normally learned.
3. The death of your brother and how you coped with it, leading you to discover new things about you such as a career calling or ambitions in life.
4. How your brother's death led you to an unexpected achievement in life.
5. His death being the root cause of your own personal issues that you had to overcome
Those are just some possible thesis statements that you can use. You should be able to find a way to fit your brother's story in depending upon the common app or specific essay demands of the school you are applying to. I suggest that you fit the story to the essay app rather than the other way around :-)
1. The way his death helped to shape your dreams and ambitions.
2. How your relationship with your brother during his lifetime taught you lessons you would not have normally learned.
3. The death of your brother and how you coped with it, leading you to discover new things about you such as a career calling or ambitions in life.
4. How your brother's death led you to an unexpected achievement in life.
5. His death being the root cause of your own personal issues that you had to overcome
Those are just some possible thesis statements that you can use. You should be able to find a way to fit your brother's story in depending upon the common app or specific essay demands of the school you are applying to. I suggest that you fit the story to the essay app rather than the other way around :-)
Thank You so much!
